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Writing task 1 essay in IELTS

Writing task 1 essay in IELTS J33Wj
The line graph illustrates the consumption of margarine, butter and fof fat & reduced spreads over a period of 26 years Overall, it is noticable that consumption of three spreads fell at the end of the year. The grams of margarine and butter went down over the period shown, while for law fat and reduced spreads increased. In 1981, the amount of butter was the most popular of margarine and lof fat & reduced spreads which was at 140 grams, whereas the purchase of margarine was about 90 grams. However, in 1996, low fat and reduced spreads were begun to eat by consumers at about 10 grams which was showed the lowest point at he period given. In 1986, the grams of butter consumption decreased dramatically to 50, while margarine also dropped significantly to 40. There was a slight increase for law fat and reduced spreads in 2001, just above 80. By contrast, this figure was the highest level in the other spreads in the final years.
The line graph illustrates the consumption of
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margarine
,
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butter
and
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fof
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fat
&
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reduced
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spreads
over a period of 26 years

Overall
, it is
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noticable
that consumption of three
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spreads
fell at the
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end
of the year. The
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grams
of
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margarine
and
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butter
went down over the period shown, while for law
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fat
and
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reduced
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spreads
increased.

In 1981, the amount of
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butter
was the most popular of
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margarine
and
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lof
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fat
&
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reduced
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spreads
which was at 140
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grams
, whereas the
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purchase
of
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margarine
was about 90
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grams
.
However
, in 1996, low
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fat
and
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reduced
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spreads
were begun
to eat by consumers at about 10
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grams
which was
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showed
the lowest point at
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he
period
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given
.

In 1986, the
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grams
of
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butter
consumption decreased
dramatically
to 50, while
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margarine
also
dropped
significantly
to 40. There was a slight increase for law
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fat
and
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reduced
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spreads
in 2001,
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just
above 80. By contrast, this figure was the highest level in the other
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spreads
in the final years.
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IELTS academic Writing task 1 essay in IELTS

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
167 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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