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DECRIBLE YOUR FAVORITE PASTIME

DECRIBLE YOUR FAVORITE PASTIME KlJWN
One of my hobbies is reading a books. I appreciate his hobby for variety of reasons, the most essential of which is that it helps me expendand my knowledge. It aslo assists me in comprehending the world, our lives, society history, and emotion in general. Futhermore, it broadens our prespective and increases our tolerance for differences. Reading literature, I feel, aids in the development of our mental faculties and provides us with valuable insights into the history of the world
One of my hobbies is reading
a books
. I appreciate his hobby for variety of reasons, the most essential of which is that it
helps
me
expendand
my knowledge. It
aslo
assists me in comprehending the world, our
lives
, society history, and emotion
in general
.
Futhermore
, it broadens our
prespective
and increases our tolerance for differences. Reading literature, I feel, aids in the development of our mental faculties and provides us with valuable insights into the history of the
world
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IELTS academic DECRIBLE YOUR FAVORITE PASTIME

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
79 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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