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One of my hobbies is reading a book. I appriciate hobby for variety of reasons, the most essential of which is that it helps me expand my knowledge. It aslo assists me in comprehending the world, ours lives, society history, and emotion in general. Furthermore, it broadens our prespective and increases our tolerance for differences. Reading literature, I feel, aids in the development of our mental faculties and provides us with valuable insights into the history of the world. Fictions allow us to journey in imaginary word, igniting our imagination and assisting us in becoming more creative. When I have leisure time, I usually spend it reading a book. In the house, I spend it reading a book. In conclusion, the feeling of reading a good book in my free time is just incredible and it can not be expressed in word.
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assists me in comprehending the world, ours
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literature, I feel, aids in the development of our mental faculties and provides us with valuable insights into the history of the world. Fictions
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us to journey in imaginary word, igniting our imagination and assisting us in becoming more creative. When I have leisure time, I
usually
spend it
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reading
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book
. In the
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house
, I spend it
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reading
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book
.
In conclusion
, the feeling of
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good
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book
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  American English
1 paragraphs
142 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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