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The table illustrates the number of students enrolling four secondary school types in three periods of time

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The table illustrates the number of students enrolling four secondary school types in three periods of time (2000, 2005, and 2009). Overall, it is noticeable that the first three types of school shown in the table were in downward trend. Meanwhile, there was only an upward trend in community schools from 2000 to 2009. In 2000, voluntary-controlled school had the highest proportion of student’s attendance with 52% whereas specialist schools had the lowest percentage at 12. The outstanding change in grammar schools was quite an obvious trend by starting at 24% in 2000 and decreasing in half of that starting point with 12% in 2009. In 2000, community schools had the same number of student’s attendance as specialist schools at 12% but different trends in a long run. Community school had almost three times of its proportion in the following given year at 32% and 58% in 2009 which was nearly five times compared with the beginning year.
The table illustrates the number of students enrolling four secondary
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types in three periods of time (2000, 2005, and 2009).

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three types of
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shown in the table were in downward
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. Meanwhile, there was
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an upward
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in community
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from 2000 to 2009.

In 2000, voluntary-controlled
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had the highest proportion of student’s attendance with 52% whereas specialist
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had the lowest percentage at 12. The outstanding
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was quite an obvious
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by starting at 24% in 2000 and decreasing in half of that starting point with 12% in 2009.

In 2000, community
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had the same number of student’s attendance as specialist
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at 12%
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in a long run. Community
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had almost three times of its proportion in the following
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year at 32% and 58% in 2009 which was
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