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The graph below shows the median earning of men and women according to their educational qualifications, in North Carolina in 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the median earning of men and women according to their educational qualifications, in North Carolina in 2017. 6aEl8
The given graph describes the income of both the genders in North Carolina based on academic achievements in the year 2017. Overall, Men were getting paid the more compared to womens with same qualification. Those who competed graduation or higher studies were toping the chart, while those who completed less than High school were at the bottom. Women earned atleast $10, 000 less than mens with same degree and nearly $5, 000 less than those with less qualification. Male workers received the highest amount of $80, 000 and the lowest amount of $22, 000, while the female workers got $50, 000 and $15, 000 respectively. Men with bachelor's degree, college or associates degree and high school got $60, 000, $40, 000 and $30, 000 respectively however, their counterpart got $40, 000, $25, 000 and $20, 000 respectively. High school completed girl and a boy studying less than high school, and a lady with Bachelor degree and a gents with a associate degree received same money.
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the income of both the genders in North Carolina based on academic achievements in the year 2017.

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qualification. Male workers received the highest amount of $80, 000 and the lowest amount of $22, 000, while the female workers
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received same money.
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