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The chart below shows the range of activites performed online by individuals in the United Kingdom in 2018.

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The bar charts under display nine online platform that performed by UK citizen in 2018. Sending and Receiving emails was displayed around 83% which is the only platform that recorded more than 80%. Moreover, the second highest online usasge was followed by researching good and services allocated it around 77%. However, online banking, social networking, and watching online video content has placed between 60% to 70% ranked first to last. Listening to music and watching streamed or catch-up TV has recorded similarly around middle 50%. Last but not least, slightly above 30% for playing or downloading games and below 30% for selling goods and services. Therefore, for it is clear that various activities has been performed by UK citizen.
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platform that recorded more than 80%.
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and services allocated it around 77%.
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banking, social networking, and watching
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video content has placed between 60% to 70% ranked
first
to last. Listening to music and watching streamed or catch-up TV has recorded
similarly
around middle 50%. Last
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above 30% for playing or downloading games and below 30% for selling
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that various activities has
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