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The bar graph indicates how the three main cause of land damage in four different areas in the world, including Afirca, Asia, Australia and Europe, with units measured in millions hectares. Overall, the damaging of three main cause of land in the Africa and the Asia is significantly higher than that of the other two categories, namely the Australia and Europe. Among them, especially the figure for breeding in the Africa is highest and the data of farming in the Australia account for the lowest. It is evident that, among three main reasons for land lost in the Africa and Asia, the breeding is the largest, destroying 500 and nearly 400 millions hectares respectively, compare to the figure for Australia and Europe are lower, stand at 220 and 120 respectively. In stark contract, the amount of land used for farming is highest in Asia, standing about 450 mh, whereas the figure for Australia is lowest, hitting at 50mh. The number of land for tree-cutting account for the highest in the Asia, reaching a peak at 480 mh, which is slightly higher than that on Africa, is roughly 380 mh. The number of land used for tree-cutting in the Australia is as high as that on Europe.
The bar graph indicates how the three main cause of
land
damage in four
different
areas in the world, including
Afirca
, Asia, Australia and Europe, with units measured in millions hectares.

Overall
, the damaging of three main cause of
land
in the Africa and the Asia is
significantly
higher than that of the other two categories,
namely
the Australia and Europe. Among them,
especially
the figure for breeding in the Africa is highest and the data of farming in the Australia account for the lowest.

It is evident that, among three main reasons for
land
lost in the Africa and Asia, the breeding is the largest, destroying 500 and
nearly
400 millions hectares
respectively
, compare to the figure for Australia and Europe are lower, stand at 220 and 120
respectively
.

In stark contract, the amount of
land
used
for farming is highest in Asia, standing about 450
mh
, whereas the figure for Australia is lowest, hitting at 50mh. The number of
land
for tree-cutting account for the highest in the Asia, reaching a peak at 480
mh
, which is
slightly
higher than that on Africa, is roughly 380
mh
. The number of
land
used
for tree-cutting in the Australia is as high as that on Europe.
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IELTS academic Damage land in main reason

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4 paragraphs
206 words
6.0
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