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The chart provides the research on the number of time the Australian adolescents ate fast food annually in twenty-five years, from 1975 to 2000.

The chart provides the research on the number of time the Australian adolescents ate fast food annually in twenty-five years, from 1975 to 2000. QLrjy

The line graph shows changes in the consumption of fast food among Australian teenagers from 1975-2000. There were dramatic changes in the consumption of all three kinds of fast food over the period. The consumption of fish and chips dropped markedly while hamburgers and pizza became much more preferred. In 1975, teenagers ate fish and chips 100 times annually, followed by that of hamburgers and pizza with 10 times and 5 times per year, respectively. In the next 5 years, there was a slight drop in fish and chips consumption but it soon recovered and reached 97 times/year in 1985. Thereafter, however, this figure declined significantly to only 40 times/year in 2000. By contrast, the figures for hamburgers and pizza followed an upward trend. The consumption of hamburgers increased sharply to 83 times/year in 1985. It then exceeded that of fish and chips and continued rising gradually to 100 times per year in 2000. Similarly, the figure for pizza climbed substantially to over 80 times/year in 1995 then remained stable until the end of the period.

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