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Average annual expenditure on cellphone and residential services, 2001-2010

Average annual expenditure on cellphone and residential services, 2001-2010 NrqQ0

The line graph illustrates how much cost spent by American customers on mobile and landline phone services between 2001 to 20010. Overall, cellphone user showed a steady and significant increase over a period while, residential phone user experience a downward trend. To begin with, In 2001, spending on mobile phone services began at $200, while the annual expenditure on the residential phone services accounted for $700. Over the last five years, expenditure on landline phone services dropped drastically by $200, whereas expenditure on cell phone services rose to just over $500. However, In 2006 mobile phone service become equal to that of landline services. Although, for last five year the mobile phone expenditure surged to $ 750 which is fourfold it initial value, whereas the annual expenditure of residential phone services striped fall till 2007 and kept on declining for last three year.

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between 2001 to 20010
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Overall
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