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The table below shows the number of mobile phones and computers per thousand people in six different countries in 2003

The table below shows the number of mobile phones and computers per thousand people in six different countries in 2003 VBW7D

The table illustrates information about the number of mobiles and computers owners per thousand people in six given countries in 2003. In overall, the Iceland has highest number of mobiles phones as well as in San Marino where the was more users of PC than the remains. There were more phone users in Malaysia, New Zealand and Iceland, however in others computer users outnumbered them. Looking at the number of telephone users, the highest figure is in the Iceland with 900 which as twice as higher than those PC users. In New Zealand and Malaysia this number stood at 550 and 250 users of mobiles with significant demand to the number of computer owners 350 and 100 respectively. On the contrary, where the computers where more demanding, in San Marino this figure sand at 720 users which is just seven times higher than those mobile users. Likewise in France this proportion possesses 300 users of PC to 200 mobile phone owners. Chile has the least figures with 100 computer users which marginally outweighs those mobile users, which stands at 50 owners

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