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compare the two charts about the percentage of sales terms through 2 quarters

compare the two charts about the percentage of sales terms through 2 quarters E3PBL

Illustrated are the two charts comparing the sales at a shopping centre between the first quarter and the last one. In general, the percentage of toys accounted for the highest consumption after two quarters, while most of the rest tend to decline in sales. Particularly, it is clear to see that there was a mere 5 percent in the number of toys sold in the first quarter, but compared to the fourth quarter the proportion in this category grew suddenly to a third. Interestingly, the percentages of computers consumed through quarters kept unchanged at around one in ten. Besides, the figure for clothes which accounted for the top consumption, about 25 percent in the first quarter, decreased sharply to only a ten. Similarly, the percentage of food and electrical also went down after months, by 5% and 10% respectively, in which sales in electrical hit the lowest point of 5 percent.

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are
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centre
 between the first
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quarter
 and the last one.

In general
, the percentage of toys accounted for the highest consumption after two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcottagecabindorm
quarters
, while most of the rest tend to decline in sales.

Particularly
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that there was a mere 5 percent in the number of toys sold in the first
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quarter
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 compared to the fourth You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermportionpartone-fourthfourth
quarter
 the proportion in this category grew suddenly
 to a third. Interestingly
, the percentages of computers consumed through You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcottagecabindorm
quarters
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 unchanged at around one in ten.

Besides
, the figure for clothes which accounted for the top consumption, about 25 percent in the first
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermportionpartone-fourthfourth
quarter
, decreased sharply
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 a ten. Similarly
, the percentage of food and electrical also
 went down after months, by 5% and 10% respectively
, in which sales in electrical hit the lowest point of 5 percent. 