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Cultural activities in Scotland

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The above table showcases information from a study of Scottish adults on their participation in cultural activities. The data is broken down into four age categories and six types of activities. The most popular activities were performances, such as dancing or singing. 22% of responders said that they participated in such performances. For 16–24-yearol ds performances were the most popular activities with about 35%. Visual arts were popular with young people as well with a bit less than a third of young scots enjoying the visual arts. Overall, the least popular programs were computer based, with only 6% of scots partaking in them. These programs were more popular with younger people. Unlike crafts, which seemed to become more popular the older the respondents were. In total 19% said that they took part in such programs. The oldest generation was the most likely to make cultural purchases with about 18%, compared to the 25-44 year old categorie’s 17%, and the youngest generation’s 11%. For 25–44-year old’s writing programs were the least attractive. However, similarly to the youngest age group, performances played a crucial role in their cultural life.

The above table showcases information from a study of Scottish adults on their participation in cultural activities. The data is broken
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