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the map below illustrates how Frenton from 1990 to 2012.summarize the information by selecting and Reporting the main features and make comparisons where the relevant

the map below illustrates how Frenton from 1990 to 2012. n1JbP
The pictures show the changes ò Frẻton from 1990 to 2012 Overall, the Frenton has witnessed significantly with the most noticable changes. Not only was the Frenton adđ mỏe places but it also remained some buildings In 1990, the school is located at the top left corner and the playing fields with tres are situated right next to it. To the east of the map is located some houses By 2012, , the houses and the playing fields with trees were demolished and turn into blocks of flat. The banks were transform into the restaurant. The café and park were converted into hotel and golf course. The trees were cut down to build the technopark. The hospital was expanded more bigger. There were the new flat built at the top right corner of the map. The theatre and supermarket were replaced with the cinema and shops
The pictures
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show
the
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changes
ò
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Frẻton
from 1990 to 2012

Overall
, the
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Frenton
has witnessed
significantly
with the most
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noticable
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changes
. Not
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only
was the
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Frenton
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adđ
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mỏe
places
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but
it
also
remained
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some
buildings

In 1990, the school
is located
at the top
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left
corner and the playing fields with
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tres
are situated
right
next
to it. To the east of the map
is located
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some
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houses


By 2012,
Two consecutive commas
,
the
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houses
and the playing fields with trees
were demolished
and turn into blocks of flat. The banks were
Consider using a past participle here: "transformed".
transform
into the restaurant. The café and park
were converted
into hotel and golf course.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
trees were
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cut
down to build the
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technopark
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
hospital
was expanded
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more bigger
. There were the new flat built
The usual prepositions to use with a corner "in" not "on". Did you mean "in the top right corner"?
at the top right corner
of the map. The
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theatre
and supermarket
were replaced
with the cinema and
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shops

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