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Crime rate in cities over different years.

Crime rate in cities over different years. 26nQM

The changing rates of different crimes in the inner city has fluctuated a lot between the year 2003 and 2012. The burglary crime has shown a minor surge in 2003-04 and saw a great fall subsequently till the year 2008. The car theft showed negligible change in 2003-05 but started increasing at a non-brisk pace since 2006. The trivial crime i. e. robbery (mugger) has been least reported in the city with incidents not rising more than 1000. The year 2004 is considered when crimes are at its trough in all the three departments. Following four years i. e. 2008, the number of incidents gradually declined. The burglary crime has been in a steady position from 2008 onwards and has been under control. The time period 2008-09 is the only timeline where are all the crimes in the city were at slightly par.

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 2003 and 2012. The burglary You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcaselawlessnessviolationfelonymisdemeanorinfraction
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 increasing at a non-brisk pace since 2006. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 2004 is considered
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