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Consumption of various nutrients by the people of America

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The charts here depicts the consumption of various nutrients by citizens of the United States of America in their daily meals. The three nutrients are sodium, saturated fats and sugar To start with, the first graph tells about the sodium consumed, In dinned sodium is used the most with 43%. Breakfast and snacks are of equal proportion, added sodium with only 14%. While, Lunch contains 29% of Sodium. Talking about the second sketch with saturated fats, Dinner remain the highest added proportion of saturated fats, on the other hand breakfast and lunch contain 16% and 26%, ended with 21% in snacks. In addition, the third blueprint shows the amount of sugar added. Surprisingly people consume most sugar in thier snacks, 42%. Breakfast with 16%, lunch 19% and the dinner with merely 23% Overall, the table illustrated the diet consumed by public of America, which can be harmful to then if they consume it too much.

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