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The given bar graph illustrates various types of people spend their time in household world between the year 1985, 1995, and 2005 in the united kingdom.

The given bar graph illustrates various types of people spend their time in household world between the year 1985, 1995, and 2005 in the united kingdom. JqGY6
The given bar graph illustrates various types of people spend their time in household world between the year 1985, 1995, and 2005 in the united kingdom. An overview of the topic holistically shows that eclectic types of persons doing work ought to the fact that unemployment spending most of the time and the least is men with full time employment. It is clearly shown that women who is not working spend 7 hours in 1985 and decrease to 6. 5 by the next decade and rose to same as before in 2005. probing ahead, the interesting fact to note that women with part time consumes 5. 2 then decline to 5 in the consequent decade and increase sharply to 6 by the term 2005. It is vividly shown that women who is working as a full time employment is in a position of spending 2 hours a day and decreased slightly to 1. 5 and raised sharply to 2. 8 by 2005. However, close to that number men started with 1 hour remain constant by the next decade and rose by half an hour. Finally the one who spend most of the time is women with unemployment and the less is men with full time job.
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spend their
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in household world between the year 1985, 1995, and 2005 in the
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holistically
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that eclectic types of persons doing work ought to the fact that unemployment spending most of the
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time
and the least is
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men
with full
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time
employment. It is
clearly
shown that
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women
who
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is
not working spend 7
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hours
in 1985 and decrease to 6. 5 by the
next
decade and rose to same as
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in 2005.

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probing
ahead, the interesting fact to note that
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women
with part
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time
consumes 5. 2 then decline to 5 in the consequent decade and increase
sharply
to 6 by the term 2005. It is
vividly
shown that
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women
who
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is
working as a full
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time
employment is in a position of spending 2
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hours
a day and decreased
slightly
to 1. 5 and raised
sharply
to 2. 8 by 2005.
However
, close to that number
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men
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with 1
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hour
remain constant by the
next
decade and rose by half an
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Finally
the one who spend most of the
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time
is
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women
with unemployment and the less is
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men
with full
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job.
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IELTS academic The given bar graph illustrates various types of people spend their time in household world between the year 1985, 1995, and 2005 in the united kingdom.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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