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The tables below exhibit the data related to the profit made from fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas of some European countries in 1999 and 2004.

The tables below exhibit the data related to the profit made from fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas of some European countries in 1999 and 2004. eboAK
The tables below exhibit the data related to the profit made from fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas of some European countries in 1999 and 2004. Overall, it can be seen that the income from coffee increased after five years for all countries. Meanwhile, for the bananas, the money produced from its sales decreased in two countries which were sweden and denmark. From the first table, the coffee sales of UK were the most significant among other countries, escalated from 1. 5 to 20 million euros after five years. Switzerland also doubled their income from coffee in that period. Meanwhile, the other countries -denmark, belgium and sweden- the increment of income produced were no more than a million euros in 2004. In the second table, Switzerland income increased more than three times from 15 to 47 million euros in 2004. Uk and belgium also made some increment after five-years period. Sweden and denmark showed a slight decline in their income in 2004 from 1. 8 to 1 and 2 to 0. 9 million euros, respectively.
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fairtrade-labelled
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coffee
and bananas of
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some
European
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countries
in 1999 and 2004.

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, it can be
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that the
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income
from
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coffee
increased after five years for all
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countries
. Meanwhile, for the bananas, the money produced from its sales decreased in two
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countries
which were
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sweden
and
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denmark
.

From the
first
table, the
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coffee
sales of UK were the most significant among other
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countries
, escalated from 1. 5 to 20
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million
euros after five years. Switzerland
also
doubled their
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income
from
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coffee
in that period. Meanwhile, the other
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countries
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-denmark
,
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belgium
and
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sweden
- the increment of
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income
produced were no more than a
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million
euros in 2004.

In the second table, Switzerland
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income
increased more than three times from 15 to 47
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million
euros in 2004.
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Uk
and
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belgium
also
made
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some
increment after five-years period. Sweden and
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denmark
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showed
a slight decline in their
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income
in 2004 from 1. 8 to 1 and 2 to 0. 9
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million
euros,
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The tables below exhibit the data related to the profit made from fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas of some European countries in 1999 and 2004.

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