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The line graph displays information about the number of energy consumption in the USA divided into six form of energy since 1980 until the future projections in 2030.

The line graph displays information about the number of energy consumption in the USA divided into six form of energy since 1980 until the future projections in 2030. RVpVo
The line graph displays information about the number of energy consumption in the USA divided into six form of energy since 1980 until the future projections in 2030. Generally, petrol and oils are the most energy that used by an American during the period. However, renewable energy such as solar/wind and hydropower less of people used it. Following this data, it clearly, the number of energy by a fossil fuels accounted higher than other sources of energy. The first position, petrol and oil as the most energy source that American used it accounted for 35 quadrillion units in 1980 and the trend was projecting to grow by nearly 50 quadrillion units in 2030. While coal and natural gas were started by 17 and 20 quadrillion units respectively, however, coal energy was projecting to increase steadily until 2030 by nearly 30 quadrillion units. Compared to natural gas, this source energy growth tiny and at the end of period, that projected by 25 quadrillion units. On the other hand, there were three form of energy accounted less than 10 quadrillion units during the period such as nuclear, solar/wind, and hydropower energy. There were similar number in 1980 by 4. 5 quadrillion units. in nuclear and solar/wind energy the trend slightly climbed until 2010 by around 5. 5 quadrillion and 5 quadrillion units and the number remain steady until the future projection (2030). The other side, hydropower the trend showed a tiny fell in 2010 and remain flat until 2030 with projections by 4. 5 quadrillion units.
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of
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consumption in the USA divided into six form of
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since 1980 until the future projections in 2030.

Generally
, petrol and oils are the most
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energy
that
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used
by an American during the period.
However
, renewable
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energy
such as solar/wind and hydropower less of
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people
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used
it.

Following this data, it
clearly
, the
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of
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energy
by a fossil fuels accounted higher than other sources of
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energy
. The
first
position, petrol and oil as the most
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energy
source that American
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used
it accounted for 35 quadrillion
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in 1980 and the trend was projecting to grow by
nearly
50 quadrillion
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in 2030. While coal and natural gas were
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started
by 17 and 20 quadrillion
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respectively
,
however
, coal
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energy
was projecting to increase
steadily
until 2030 by
nearly
30 quadrillion
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units
. Compared to natural gas, this source
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growth tiny and at the
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end
of period, that projected by 25 quadrillion units.

On the other hand
, there were three form of
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accounted less than 10 quadrillion
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during the period such as nuclear, solar/wind, and hydropower
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energy
. There were similar
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in 1980 by 4. 5 quadrillion
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.
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nuclear and solar/wind
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the trend
slightly
climbed until 2010 by around 5. 5 quadrillion and 5 quadrillion
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and the
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remain steady until the future projection (2030). The other side, hydropower the trend
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showed
a tiny fell in 2010 and remain flat until 2030 with projections by 4. 5 quadrillion
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IELTS academic The line graph displays information about the number of energy consumption in the USA divided into six form of energy since 1980 until the future projections in 2030.

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