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The diagram depicts in which way the electricity is generated through water flowing from high level to low level in day and night.

The diagram depicts in which way the electricity is generated through water flowing from high level to low level in day and night. kgAE8
The diagram depicts in which way the electricity is generated through water flowing from high level to low level in day and night. In day, the water from high-level reservoir undergo in dam which is opened only in day. Then, water flows into downward direction to generate electricity and afterwards, it is passed to the reversible turbines which is operate generator in day. From that electricity is generated and passed to generator in power station. Then, the electric power is passed to power lines and from there it is supplied to national grid and water is passed to low-level reservoir. In night time, the process is start from low-level reservoir to high-level reservoir. Firstly, water is passed to reversible turbines which pumps water into high -level reservoir. The flow of water in night is in upward direction. Next, water is undergo to dam which is closed in night and from that finally, it go in high-level reservoir. The same process is operated in hydroelectric power station to make electricity every day and night.
The diagram depicts in which way the
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electricity
is generated
through
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water
flowing from high level to low level in day and night.

In day, the
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water
from high-level
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reservoir
undergo in dam which
is opened
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only
in day. Then,
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water
flows into downward direction to generate
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electricity
and afterwards, it is
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passed
to the reversible turbines which is
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operate
generator in day. From that
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electricity
is generated
and
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passed
to generator in
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power
station. Then, the electric
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power
is
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passed
to
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power
lines and from there it
is supplied
to national grid and
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water
is
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passed
to low-level reservoir.

In
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night time
, the process is
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start
from low-level
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reservoir
to high-level
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reservoir
.
Firstly
,
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water
is
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passed
to reversible turbines which pumps
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water
into high -level
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reservoir
. The flow of
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water
in
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night
is in upward direction.
Next
,
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water
is undergo to dam which
is closed
in
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night
and from that
finally
, it go in high-level reservoir.

The same process
is operated
in hydroelectric
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power
station to
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make
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electricity
every day and
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night
.

IELTS academic The diagram depicts in which way the electricity is generated through water flowing from high level to low level in day and night.

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