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the diagram show the process if making sugar from sugarcane .

the diagram show the process if making sugar from sugarcane. kgALd
The diagrammatical representation enumerates the steps involved in producing sugar from sugarcane. Overall, it is clear that making sugar from sugarcane is a lengthy process and each step followed in the procedure is vital. On having a metculous glance at the given illustration it is vivid that firstly, sugar canes are grown in tge field and it takes 12 to 18 montgs for growing. After that, the riped sugar canes are harvested either maanually or by machines. Then, the harvested crope is sent for crushing which takes place in a machine where the sugar canes are squeezed and smashed for obtaining juice. probing forth, the juice contains some impurities which are purified using a limestone filter and the filtered juice is heated with tge help of evaporator where the juice becomes syrup. Once the syrup is made the sugar crystals are separated from the syrup by using centrifugation method. At last, a big vessel is used for drying and cooling and finally the end product is sugar.
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diagrammatical
representation enumerates the steps involved in producing
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sugar
from sugarcane.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that making
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sugar
from sugarcane is a lengthy process and each step followed in the procedure is vital.
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On
having a
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metculous
glance at the
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given
illustration it is vivid that
firstly
,
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sugar
canes
are grown
in
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tge
field and it takes 12 to 18
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montgs
for growing. After that, the
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riped
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sugar
canes
are harvested
either
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maanually
or by machines. Then, the harvested
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crope
is
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sent
for crushing which takes place in a machine where the
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sugar
canes
are squeezed
and smashed for obtaining juice.

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probing
forth, the juice contains
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some
impurities which
are purified
using a limestone filter and the filtered juice
is heated
with
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tge
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help
of evaporator where the juice becomes syrup.
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Once
the syrup
is made
the
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sugar
crystals
are separated
from the syrup by using
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centrifugation
method. At last, a
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big
vessel is
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used
for drying and cooling and
finally
the
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end
product is
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sugar
.
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IELTS academic the diagram show the process if making sugar from sugarcane.

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3 paragraphs
167 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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