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Consumption of meat in Europe

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The graph showcases the quantitative data on the consumption of different kinds of meats by people in a country of Europe during the years from 1979 to 2004. In overall, chicken and beef being the most favorite among other meats for a European, the quantity of fish consumed was kept under laid to other meats throughout these years. Although the consumption of beef booked the most popular spot among the people during the late seventies and early eighties, it experienced a steep downward trend in its consumption from the mid-eighties towards the year 2004. During this period, chicken dominated the meat industry by touching a consumption rate of 250 grams per week for one person by 2004 which crowned as the highest consumption rate back then. The lamb rubbed shoulder to shoulder with chicken during 1979 and later held a subtle popularity through the years with an overall diminishing trend contrasting to chicken. In contrast with the other meats, the meat of fish completely stayed out of the competition throughout the period by finding comfort in the mere 50 grams per week mark.
The graph showcases the quantitative data on the
consumption
of
different
kinds of
meats
by
people
in a country of Europe during the years from 1979 to 2004.

In
overall
, chicken and beef being the most favorite among other
meats
for a European, the quantity of fish consumed was
kept
under laid to other
meats
throughout these years.

Although the
consumption
of beef booked the most popular spot among the
people
during the late seventies and early eighties, it experienced a steep downward trend in its
consumption
from the mid-eighties towards the year 2004. During this period, chicken dominated the
meat
industry by touching a
consumption
rate of 250 grams per week for one person by 2004 which crowned as the highest
consumption
rate back then.

The lamb rubbed shoulder to shoulder with chicken during 1979 and later held a subtle popularity through the years with an
overall
diminishing trend contrasting to chicken.
In contrast
with the other
meats
, the
meat
of fish completely stayed out of the competition throughout the period by finding comfort in the mere 50 grams per week mark.
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