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UK's most popular seaside towns 1960

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This table compares the number of visitors in each seaside town who visited the UK in 1960. It provides information about six different towns, including Blackpool, Margate, Bournemouth, Great Yarmouth, St Ives and Eastbourne. Overall, what stands out from the table is that Blackpool was the most popular place for people to visit, with 100 thousands visitors, as opposed to, the number of tourists at the Eastbourne town is last on the list, with 20 thousands visitors, this means this place has far fewer tourists than the other towns. Looking at the details, the next most common area was Margate, with 75 thousands of people visiting there, which is three times as common as St Ives, at 25 thousands people. This was followed by Bournemount ranking in the third place, with 60 thousands guests and just ahead of Great Yarmount, at 50 thousands visitors. This making Great Yarmount half as numerous tourists as the most popular attraction - Blackpool.
This table compares the number of
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visitors
in each seaside town who visited the UK in 1960. It provides information about six
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different
towns, including Blackpool, Margate, Bournemouth, Great
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Yarmouth
, St Ives and
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Eastbourne
.

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, what stands out from the table is that Blackpool was the most popular place for
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people
to visit, with 100 thousands
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visitors
, as opposed to, the number of tourists at the
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Eastbourne
town is last on the list, with 20 thousands
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visitors
, this means this place has far fewer tourists than the other towns.

Looking at the
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details
, the
next
most common area was Margate, with
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75 thousands of
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people
visiting there, which is three times as common as St Ives, at 25 thousands
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people
. This
was followed
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Bournemount
ranking in the third place, with 60 thousands guests and
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ahead of Great
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Yarmount
, at 50 thousands
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visitors
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Yarmount
half as numerous tourists as the most popular attraction
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Blackpool.
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IELTS academic UK's most popular seaside towns 1960

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