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The bar chart compares the amount of money got from the specific film industry annually over the period of 9 years. In 2002, the rental fee charged the highest bill and was leading as a primary role. Over the following 5 years, the DVD sales overtook gradually and became the leader of the market. The films renting payment hold the largest amount, approximately 170, 000 sales whereas there was absolutely zero sale in the field of the Blu-ray production in 2002. The DVD manufacturing reached the peak of the sales with 220, 000 while the hire charge saw a declining amount in the year of 2007. In the same year, interestingly, although the VHS sales was down to zero, the sales of Blu-ray slightly increased but that amount was almost negligible. We can obviously see that the DVD selling was still leading the market for another 4 years. 2011 saw a decreasing number in the renting films fee, however, it saw the increasing number in the production of Blu-ray film.

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