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Consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030

Consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030 KVENw

The line graph below illustrates the information from the report in 2008 about a U. S. Energy consumption by fuel from 1980 to 2030 with history and projections are Petrol and Oil, Coal, Natural Gas, Nuclear, Solar/Wind and Hydropower. Units are measured in Quadrillions. Overall, petrol and oil had been consumed maximum, while hydropower remained steadily. Nuclear and solar/wind were consumed minimum quadrillion. Petrol and oil were used a lot in 1980 from 35quin to 50quin in 2030. But, in 1995, there was steady increase from 32quin to 42quin in 2005. Coal has risen from above 15quin in 1980 to 24quin in 1995. Also, it was stable from 1995 to 2005 in between 20quin and 25quin and now has climbed up to 30quin in 2030. Consumption of energy from Nuclear, Solar or wind an hydropower remained unchanged below 5quin in 1980. Now, nuclear has grown up to above 5quin in 2030, while solar / wind and hydropower had slightly increased above 5quin in 2030.

The line graph below illustrates the information from the report in 2008 about a U. S. Energy consumption by fuel from 1980 to 2030 with history and projections are Petrol and Oil, Coal, Natural Gas, Nuclear, Solar/Wind and Hydropower. Units are measured
 in Quadrillions.

Overall
, petrol and oil had been consumed
 maximum, while hydropower remained steadily
. Nuclear and solar/wind were consumed
 minimum quadrillion.

Petrol and oil were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 a lot in 1980 from 35quin to 50quin in 2030. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
, in 1995, there was steady increase from 32quin to 42quin in 2005. Coal has risen from above 15quin in 1980 to 24quin in 1995. Also
, it was stable from 1995 to 2005 in between 20quin and 25quin and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 has climbed up to 30quin in 2030. Consumption of energy from Nuclear, Solar or wind Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'a
an
 hydropower remained unchanged below 5quin in 1980. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
, nuclear has grown up to above 5quin in 2030, while solar / wind and hydropower had slightly
 increased above 5quin in 2030. 

IELTS academic Consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030

Academic

American English

3 paragraphs

164 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Lexical Resource: 6.5

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Grammatical Range: 6.5

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Task Achievement: 6.5

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