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Consider the following academic writing task where you are from the percentage of people in Great Britain living alone by age and sex in 2004 and 2005 shoes 3 ideas from the following list to frame an appropriate response.

Consider the following academic writing task where you are from the percentage of people in Great Britain living alone by age and sex in 2004 and 2005 shoes 3 ideas from the following list to frame an appropriate response. 6dGoG
The bar chart represents the proportion of individuals living solo by age wise as well as in gender wise in Great Britain in 2014 and 2015. Overall, In first two age groups the great amount of males live partners including also a majority of women live solitary in last two age groups in Great Britain. In 2004 and 2005 16-24 age groups of man with the percentage of almost five were living solitary. Whereas there was an increasing trend can be seen in the next age group, where about 10% of made were living solitary. furthermore in the age group of 45- 64 years old and 65-74 years old there were similarities person in the proportion of population of men. In last age group nearly 30% of males were living solo in a great Britain. However in proportion of females have been increasing trend is shown in the first age group. The proportion of females were approximately 3% who are living alone and reached to above 30% in the fourth group of age. In the fifth group of duration or most near to 60% women who were living alone.
The bar chart represents the
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age
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Great
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solitary in last two
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Great
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In 2004 and 2005 16-24
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age
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groups
of
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man
with the percentage of almost five were
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living
solitary. Whereas there was an increasing trend can be
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age
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, where about 10% of made were
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solitary.
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in the
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45- 64
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and 65-74 years
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nearly
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of females have been increasing trend
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age
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. The
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proportion
of females were approximately 3% who are
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alone and reached to above 30% in the fourth
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IELTS academic Consider the following academic writing task where you are from the percentage of people in Great Britain living alone by age and sex in 2004 and 2005 shoes 3 ideas from the following list to frame an appropriate response.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
189 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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