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confusion in this table. what does this regions (africa, america etc.) signifies? are these the travel destinations or does it says that so and so number of people went or international travel from these regions? For ex. if 1st one is correct then we say 18.2 million travellers "went to" africa or if the second reason is correct then we say 18.2 million people "from" africa travelled foreign countries.

The presented table compares the number of international travellers sin 5 different regions, in the years 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. The measurements are made in millions. Overall, the overseas travel gained popularity within the given time period of 15 years. It is evident from the table that travellers preferred to visit Europe more than any other regions while the Middle East remained the least favoured travel destination. According to the statistics, number of travellers, who chose Europe as their foreign travel destination, increased from 280. 2 to 400. 2 million, from 1990 to 2005. Additionally, the increase was significant from 80. 2 million in 1990 to 390. 3 million in 1995. Likewise, a similar upward trend was observed for Africa and the Asia and the Pacific from 1990 to 2005. Although the Middle East attracted least number of total travellers, it experienced an upward trajectory beginning from 9. 8 to 15. 8 million from 1990 to 2005. In contrast, the trend pattern for America showed moderate fluctuations. While there was a considerable growth in the number of visitors from 80. 5 million in 1990 to 112. 5 million in 1995, the figures eventually remained same as before after a time span of 10 years (113. 2 million).
The presented table compares the
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regions, in the years 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. The measurements
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, who chose Europe as their foreign travel destination, increased from 280. 2 to 400. 2
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in 1990 to 390. 3
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, it experienced an upward trajectory beginning from 9. 8 to 15. 8
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in 1990 to 112. 5
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IELTS academic confusion in this table. what does this regions (africa, america etc. ) signifies? are these the travel destinations or does it says that so and so number of people went or international travel from these regions? For ex. if 1st one is correct then we say 18. 2 million travellers "went to" africa or if the second reason is correct then we say 18. 2 million people "from" africa travelled foreign countries.

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