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Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students. dwlr
In this technological age, computers have become the foundation of almost everything. The involvement of computers in the teaching method is inevitable and will certainly bring many improvements to the table. However, some people believe there is a risk associated with the dependence on computers in classroom for the students. In my understanding, computers can enhance the traditional way of teaching if used properly.
In this technological age, computers have become the foundation of almost everything. The involvement of computers in the teaching method is inevitable and will
certainly
bring
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many
improvements to the table.
However
,
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some
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people
believe there is a
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risk
associated with the dependence on computers in classroom for the students. In my understanding, computers can enhance the traditional way of teaching if
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used
properly
.

IELTS academic Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students.

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