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The flow chart below shows an automatic photo booth

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The flow chart describes an photo booth which is operated automatically. Overall, the automatic photo shop shows the internal process of capturing an image, position of an image and different features that include in photo booth. Before entering into an photo shop, an electronic system is arranged to the door. To access the door we need to add coins for only the type of pics includes 1 large format or 4 passport - sized phots and are of coloured or black and white and should be delivered within 60 seconds. The curtains must be closed before the process starts and the adjustable stool must be placed in such a way that there should be an eye contact. we need to wait for the light signal flash for 3 seconds which is designed automatically.
The flow chart
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photo
booth which
is operated
automatically
.

Overall
, the automatic
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photo
shop
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shows
the internal process of capturing an image, position of an image and
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different
features that include in
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photo
booth.

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Before
entering into
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an
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photo
shop, an electronic system
is arranged
to the door. To access the door we need to
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add
coins for
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only
the type of pics includes 1 large format or 4
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passport
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-
sized
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phots
and are of
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coloured
or black and white and should
be delivered
within 60 seconds.

The curtains
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must
be closed
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before
the process
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starts
and the adjustable stool
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must
be placed
in such a way that there should be an eye contact.
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we
need to wait for the light signal flash for 3 seconds which
is designed
automatically
.

IELTS academic The flow chart below shows an automatic photo booth

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
133 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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