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“Decoding a flower’s message” 2012 by Sigma Xi, The Scientific Research Society

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“Decoding a flower’s message” is an expedition to seek purpose, process, and results of the recent research is done on those Texas gourd vines of biologists. The article has explained extremely fundamental uses of scent for flowers. By using floral fragrances, gourd vine can manipulate animal behavior, attract many pollinators in an open network. To be more specific, the aroma includes 10 compounds, but the most abundant and the only one that lures squash bees into traps- is 1, 4 dimethoxybenzene. On the contrary, back in 1871, the scientists neglect the use of flower’s scent in keeping harmful insects away in which they just have focused on glands and sticky hairs. Moreover, this raises a concern about the species of pollinators approaching to flower, unfortunately, the extra scent also can well call in more beetles too. The team of biologists started to trial, plant 168 gourd vine to find out the veracity of this trait, what they saw was double the normal number of beetles on fragrance enhanced blossoms. Pollinators, to their surprise, did not prefer the highly scented flowers. Squash bees were indifferent implies they did not care about the scents and were equally drawn to both types of flowers, and honey bees visited enhanced flowers less often than normal ones. Owing to the fact that the more beetles on a flower, the less likely a honey bee was to visit it. Considering the situation of investigated the effects of the odor on ants, "If you really ramp up the odor, you don't get more pollinators, but you Ccin really get ripped apart by your enemies, " Rog Raguso has also given an explicit explanation for that. Ants avoided 2-phenyl ethanol just as much as bees did, just a little of this compound can be lethal to ants as little as one hour. In conclusion, understanding a flower's message to both pollinators and enemies is absolutely essential because shows that within the scent of a single flower, some individual compounds attract pollinators while others serve as a defense.
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pollinators in an open network. To be more specific, the aroma includes 10 compounds,
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was double the normal number of beetles on fragrance enhanced blossoms. Pollinators, to their surprise, did not prefer the
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flowers
. Squash bees were indifferent implies they did not care about the
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