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The line graph demonstrates amount of fast-food consumed in the years 1970-1990, UK.

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The line graph demonstrates amount of fast-food consumed in the years 1970-1990, UK. Overall, amounts of fast-foods: hamburger, fish and chips. However, amount of pizza was downward trend at the end of given the period. It is observed that in the first year, amounts of fish and chips stood at 90 grams and slightly increased and reach about 150 grams in 1980. In 1970, amounts of hamburger stood at 40 grams and minimally rose to over the next 15 years to level off at 110 grams. Consumption of pizza stood at 300, in 1970. After which, it moderately declined to 200 grams in 1985. Finally, it slightly fluctuated around 210 grams. In 1985, it noticeably increased to from 300 to 500 grams. Consumption of hamburger significantly went up to between 110 and 290. To sum up, consumption of fast-food were at their highest in 1990 while the weakest consumption of pizza figure could be observed in 1990.
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IELTS academic The line graph demonstrates amount of fast-food consumed in the years 1970-1990, UK.

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