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comparing the quantities of goods delivered in the UK in term of four types of transport over the period from 1974 to 2002.

comparing the quantities of goods delivered in the UK in term of four types of transport over the period from 1974 to 2002. pXPn9

Given is the graph comparing the quantities of goods delivered in the UK in term of four types of transport, namely road, water, rail and pipeline over the period from 1974 to 2002. Overall, the total cargoes transported by road, water, and pipeline displayed an upward trend during the research period. The exception to this was the number of products shipped by rail which shows a fluctuation. One particularly interesting fact highlighted by the figure is that, after experiencing a slight rise to nearly 80 million tonnes during the first 15 years, the quantity of frieghts delivered on road increased substantially to around 100 million tonnes. With regards to water, similar to the road, between 1974 and 1982, the figure for goods transported was stable at 40 million tonnes during the first 4 years before seeing a rise to about 60 million tonnes. It was followed by stability before surging to over 60 million tonnes during the remainder of the year. The cargoes carried by pipeline began the recorder period with around 5 million tonnes before seeing an fivefold increase to over 20 million tonnes from 1974 to 1982. It dropped to 20 million tonnes in the next 4 years and then stayed at the same level in the last years. With reference to rail, after remaining steady at 40 million tonnes in the first 4 years, the mount of goods transported hover between 30 million tonnes and 40 million tonnes in the last years.

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