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THE DIAGRAMS BELOW SHOW CHANGES OF A CINEMA FROM 1980 UNTIL NOW. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagrams illustrate developments in cinema from 1980 until now. Overall, the cinema has been profoundly affected due constructions throughout the period. Turning to the details, it is clear that, one of the standing facility in cinema is toilet which locates in the west part of the cinema. Similarly, ticket office located in the south east of the cinema still stands. The entrance which is located in the middle of the south part still functions. On the other hand, car park was completely knocked-down to construct cinema 2 and cinema 3 in the north of the cinema. Meanwhile, cinema 2 was divided into 2 parts, cinema 4 and cinema 5. Cinema one located in the south west of the cinema near the entrance turned into food and drinks and relax room. Drinks was replaced with DVD shop in the south east corner of the cinema. Moreover, cinema 1 was built besides the toilet.
The diagrams illustrate developments in
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cinema
from 1980 until
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now
.
Overall
, the
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cinema
has been
profoundly
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affected
due constructions throughout the period.

Turning to the
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details
, it is
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clear
that, one of the standing facility in
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cinema
is toilet which locates in the west part of the
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cinema
.
Similarly
, ticket office located in the
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south east
of the
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cinema
still
stands. The entrance which
is located
in the middle of the south part
still
functions.

On the other hand
, car park was completely knocked-down to construct
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cinema
2 and
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cinema
3 in the north of the
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cinema
. Meanwhile,
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cinema
2
was divided
into 2 parts,
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cinema
4 and
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cinema
5.
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Cinema
one located in the
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south west
of the
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cinema
near the entrance turned into food and drinks and relax room. Drinks
was replaced
with DVD shop in the
This expression is normally spelled as one or with a hyphen.
south east
corner of the cinema.

Moreover
,
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cinema
1
was built
besides
the toilet.

IELTS academic THE DIAGRAMS BELOW SHOW CHANGES OF A CINEMA FROM 1980 UNTIL NOW.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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