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Compare maps in now and 20 years ago in the island of Byte

Compare maps in now and 20 years ago in the island of Byte 5bn3V
The maps depict how the island of Byte has transformed in 20 years. Overall, the island of Byte has developed into a more industrial and crowded place. The road has been expanded and more facilities have been built. There are still a lot of things that have stayed the same. Nature, one of the things that you can not easily alter is still there. The church has not been varied. The farm, which is in the middle of Byte, remains unchanged. The river and its bridge are still being next to the windmill. As in present days, a stadium, a factory, and skyscrapers have been built. The residential area has also been expanded. And it is similar to the road, which has been both enlarged and became a two-way road.
The maps depict how the island of Byte has transformed in 20 years.

Overall
, the island of Byte has developed into a more industrial and crowded place. The road has
been expanded
and more facilities have
been built
.

There are
still
a lot of
things that have stayed the same. Nature, one of the things that you can not
easily
alter is
still
there. The church has not
been varied
. The farm, which is in the middle of Byte, remains unchanged.
The
river and its bridge are
still
being
next
to the windmill.

As in present days, a stadium, a factory, and skyscrapers have
been built
. The residential area has
also
been expanded
. And it is similar to the road, which has been both enlarged and became a two-way road.
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IELTS academic Compare maps in now and 20 years ago in the island of Byte

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
130 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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