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The supplied bar graph compares the number of global hybrid vehicles has beenwere sold throughout the world from 2006-2009. It is apparently seen that the United States accounted for the greatest proportion of sales, with 250, 000 vehicles sold in 2006. Then in 2007, it continued its accelerated development. There was with a high of 350, 000 vehicles sold. In addition, the number of sales there was a downward tendency in the number of salesthe next two years, from 350000 to 280000 over the next two years. According to the given data, Japan and other nations sold the same amount number of personal transport items, which totalled 50000 at the start of the period. Following that, from 2006 and 2008, there was a modest increase in populationthe sales figures, with an average sale of 75, 000 and 100, 000 peopleautomobiles. In addition, while the sales in Japan soared to 350, 000 in 2009, those in the rest of the globe remained stable compared to the previous year. Overall, the bar chart indicated indicates that Japan experienced significant rising trends in car sales last year, surpassing that of the United States.
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that the United States accounted for the greatest proportion of

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while the sales in Japan soared to 350, 000 in 2009, those in the rest of the globe

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in car sales last year, surpassing that of the United States.
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