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Compare the Kendal, Premda and Cord Hotels

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The table gives information on the various characteristics related to 3 different hotels (Kendal, Premda and Cord). Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the Kendal Hotel is the cheapest one in comparison to the other high-priced hotels. While the Cord has the highest star rating, it obtains the least number of rooms. Unlike the aforementioned hotel, the Kendal and the Premda have the same number of rooms, whereas their ranks are the lowest. The Cord Hotel is the furthest one from the city centre in contrast with the remaining hotels. Therefore, the Kendal and Premda are 1 and 2 km away relatively. To sum up, analyzing different features and the quality of the listed hotels, the Cord looks like the best hotel to sojourn as the consequence of high star rating. It has the first-rate reputation despite overprice due to the location in the back of beyond.
The table gives information on the various characteristics related to 3
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different
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(Kendal,
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Premda
and Cord).

Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is
readily
apparent that the Kendal
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Hotel
is the cheapest one
in comparison
to the other high-priced
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hotels
. While the Cord has the highest star rating, it obtains the least number of rooms. Unlike the aforementioned
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hotel
, the Kendal and the
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Premda
have the same number of rooms, whereas their ranks are the lowest. The Cord
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Hotel
is the furthest one from the city
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centre
in contrast
with the remaining
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hotels
.
Therefore
, the Kendal and
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Premda
are 1 and 2 km away
relatively
.

To sum up, analyzing
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different
features and the quality of the listed
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hotels
, the Cord looks like the best
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hotel
to sojourn as the consequence of high star rating. It has the
first
-rate reputation despite overprice due to the location in the back of beyond.
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IELTS academic Compare the Kendal, Premda and Cord Hotels

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3 paragraphs
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6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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