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COLLECTION OF RAINWATER IN AUSTRALIA

COLLECTION OF RAINWATER IN AUSTRALIA ldYN9

The diagram presents the process of collecting and converting the raindrops to potable water in a town in Australia. Overall, it can be seen that it is composed of 6 steps starting from draining and culminating in household distribution. In details, primary, the water coming from the raindrops are collected through the pipes attached per house which serves as the drainer. Secondly, a maching will thoroughly filter the accumulated rainwater. After, two huge containers will be utilized. The first one will only used as a container storage then to the second wherein, treating the water from any contamination will happen. In addition, in order for this to successfully achieve, a chemicals will be added into the water. After the water treatment, the water will then absorb with a specilized tubing line to distribute the end product to the respective houses as a drinking water.

The diagram presents the process of collecting and converting the raindrops to potable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 in a town in Australia. Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that it is composed
 of 6 steps starting from draining and culminating in household distribution.

In This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
, primary, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 coming from the raindrops are collected
 through the pipes attached per This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 which serves as the drainer. Secondly
, a Possible spelling mistake found.machinemarchingmatchingcachingachingmashing
maching
 will thoroughly
 filter the accumulated rainwater. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
, two huge containers will be utilized
. The first
 one will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 as a container storage then to the second wherein, treating the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 from any contamination will happen. In addition
, in order for this to successfully
 achieve, Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a chemical" or simply "chemicals"?a chemicalchemicals
a chemicals
 will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 into the water.

After the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 treatment, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 will then absorb with a Possible spelling mistake found.specialized
specilized
 tubing line to distribute the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 product to the respective This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 as a drinking You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
. 