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IELTS Task 1 Reported on April 20th Read my sample answer for this question here. ielts essay beachfront map

IELTS Task 1 Reported on April 20th Read my sample answer for this question here. ielts essay beachfront map n6onn

The two given pictorial representations show the changes that have been occurred in the layout of the beachfront. It can observed that since 1950 lots of new services and roads lanes have been added in the present time. Firstly, it can be noticed that in prevailing situation road coming from the city is extended to the lighthouse which was only upto the carpark in 1950. A new development can be seen in the construction of the new parking lot in place of the playground due to the fact that large number of people visits beach front. Secondly, new restraurant have been opened up which was not there in year 1950. Additionally, two newsurf club has been formed on both side of the pool for people to learn surfing. Moreover, the lenght of the pool has also increased by 25m that is near therestaurant. However, the other pool near to lighthouse has not be changed. Lastly, there is no alteration in pavillion and dinning tables since 1950.

The two This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 pictorial representations This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 that have been occurred
 in the layout of the beachfront. It can The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "observe"observe
observed
 that since 1950 lots of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 services and roads lanes have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 in the present time.

Firstly
, it can be noticed
 that in prevailing situation road coming from the city is extended
 to the lighthouse which was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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upto
 the Possible spelling mistake found.car parkcarp ark
carpark
 in 1950. A You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 development can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in the construction of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 parking lot in place of the playground due to the fact that large number of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 visits beach front.

Secondly
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
Possible spelling mistake found.restaurant
restraurant
 have been opened
 up which was not there in year 1950. Additionally
, two Possible spelling mistake found.new surf
newsurf
 club has been formed
 on both side of the pool for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to learn surfing. Moreover
, the Possible spelling mistake found.length
lenght
 of the pool has also
 increased by Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "25 m"25 m
25m
that is
 near Possible spelling mistake found.the restaurant
therestaurant
. However
, the other pool near to lighthouse has not Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: "been".been
be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
.

Lastly
, there is no alteration in Possible spelling mistake found.pavilion
pavillion
 and dinning tables since 1950. 