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Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century

Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century l2dX
The main growth which have taken place in the village of Chorleyhood over twelve decades is depicted in the maps. Broadly, It is apparent from the information supplied that although the majority of transport infrastructures had been constructed further transportation facilities in the last period, few infrastructures of transportation had not unchanged in the first period. Commencing from 1868 to 1883, in close proximity of the main roads was covered a small area in Chorleywood village. There were both facilities like Chorleywood and Golf Course which is located on the right-hand side of this village. In the next 39 years, it was paved the main road to the east in this village. In addition, in the year of 1909, a railway line which cut across from west to east was built in this area. Not only the railway line but also Chorleywood station was constucted in the third period. Then the railway line continued until 1970 from west to east. At that time, another facility which was a motorway was introduced to the east of the village, and from 1970 to 1994, further facilities such as motorway intersections with the railway and another main road in the north. Hence, several changes had been made for the betterment of the village.
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Chorleyhood
over twelve decades
is depicted
in the maps.

Broadly
, It is apparent from the information supplied that although the majority of transport infrastructures had
been constructed
further
transportation facilities in the last period, few infrastructures of transportation had not unchanged in the
first
period.

Commencing from 1868 to 1883, in
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of the
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main
roads
was covered
a
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small
area in
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Chorleywood
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village
. There were both facilities like
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Chorleywood
and Golf Course which
is located
on the right-hand side of this
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village
. In the
next
39 years, it
was paved
the
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main
road to the east in this
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village
.
In addition
, in the year of 1909, a
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railway
line which
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cut
across from west to east
was built
in this area. Not
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only
the
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railway
line
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but
also
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Chorleywood
station was
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constucted
in the third period. Then the
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railway
line continued until 1970 from west to east. At that time, another facility which was a motorway
was introduced
to the east of the
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village
, and from 1970 to 1994,
further
facilities such as motorway intersections with the
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railway
and another
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main
road in the north.
Hence
, several
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changes
had
been made
for the betterment of the
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village
.

IELTS academic Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century

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