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Charts show information about money spent by Japan and Malaysia in 2010. The data is calibrated in terms of percentage.

Charts show information about money spent by Japan and Malaysia in 2010. The data is calibrated in terms of percentage. 53wmm
The rendered pie charts depicts information about money spent by Japan and Malaysia in 2010. The data is calibrated in terms of percentage. Overall, It is clear that money spent on healthcare facilities was maximum in Japan whereas, expenditure on food was minimum in Malaysia. Having a myopic look, it is clear that the money spent by Japan on housing transfer transport and other goods and services was less than a third, just above one and just above one in twenty correspondingly. The percentage of money spent on housing was less than a third in Japan and expenditure on other goods and services was just above one in twenty was lower in Malaysia. Moving further, our facilities of health Care was just above 1 in 20 as a post to the money spend on food facilities by households was a fifth in 2010 in the Japan. The cost indulge by households on housing facilities was just above a quarter during 2010 in the Japan.
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whereas, expenditure on food was minimum in Malaysia.

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on housing was less than a third in
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and expenditure on other
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and services was
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one in twenty was lower in Malaysia.

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, our facilities of health Care was
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spend on food facilities by households was a fifth in 2010 in the
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. The cost
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IELTS academic Charts show information about money spent by Japan and Malaysia in 2010. The data is calibrated in terms of percentage.

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164 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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