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The table illustrates the proportions of consumer spending in 3 differents categories and campare them between 5 varrious countries in 2002.

The table illustrates the proportions of consumer spending in 3 differents categories and campare them between 5 varrious countries in 2002. KndR0
The table illustrates the proportions of consumer spending in 3 differents categories and campare them between 5 varrious countries in 2002. As it shown in the table, Turkey in on first place in Food/frink/tobacco and leisure/education category with 32. 14% and 4. 35% respectively, While, They are in second placein clothing/footwear category with 6. 63%. First place of the clothes group in for Italy with 9%.
The table illustrates the proportions of consumer spending in 3
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them between 5
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countries in 2002.

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/tobacco and leisure/education category with 32. 14% and 4. 35%
respectively
, While, They are in second
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clothing/footwear category with 6. 63%.
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place of the clothes group in for Italy with 9%.
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IELTS academic The table illustrates the proportions of consumer spending in 3 differents categories and campare them between 5 varrious countries in 2002.

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