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chart shows the reasons why some people in the UK prefer to cycle to work. Conversely, the second chart gives reasons for those who choose to go to work by car.

chart shows the reasons why some people in the UK prefer to cycle to work. Conversely, the second chart gives reasons for those who choose to go to work by car. wKWX3
There are 2 topics about the reasons why people use vehicles to do their work. One way by cycling, which one by driving and surely these reasons were made by each person who voted and it appears in many reasons. For the reasons for cycling, 30% of people focus this way to go to work most because of two big issues; one is less pollution, second is health and fitness. On the other hand, the best reasons to make people always choose driving to work is comfort in 40% and distance to work 21% respectively. Conversely, cycling and driving to work might show more impact than this pie chart. If you focus on the problems or many topics in the world today, for example the pollution, location of the place in each country or self-attitude etc. so you will see the several reasons to support these charts in the way of comparatives more fully.
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IELTS academic chart shows the reasons why some people in the UK prefer to cycle to work. Conversely, the second chart gives reasons for those who choose to go to work by car.

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3 paragraphs
154 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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