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discuss about car production

discuss about car production 75qP5

The given bie chart depicts The aggregate ratio of the worldwide passenger car production for diverse countries in the year 2015. It is clear from the graph that, Europ and greater China was far higher among others. According to what is shown, Europ and greater China illustrated similar behavior. Both stands out the most in terms of manufacturing cars at 25 percent and 26 percent respectively. North America was the second largest country in making vehicles at 19 percent. Meanwhile, Japan and korea were at the 16 marks in 2015 as they holds the third rank among other nations. Apart from this, south Asia didn't comprised of much proportion as it accounts only for 8% of the total car production. Afterward, African, Middle East, and south America had insignificant figure as it comprised of 2 percent and 4 percent respectively. To sum up, we could say that Europ and greater China was by far the most dominanet compared with others in term of manufacturing cars.

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 chart depicts The aggregate ratio of the worldwide passenger You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 production for diverse countries in the year 2015. It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 from the graph that, Possible spelling mistake found.EuropeEuroEuropaEurosEur opEuro p
Europ
 and greater China was far higher among others.

According to what is shown
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Europ
 and greater China illustrated similar behavior. Both stands out the most in terms of manufacturing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
 at 25 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percent
 and 26 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percent
respectively
. North America was the second largest country in making vehicles at 19 percent.

Meanwhile, Japan and Possible spelling mistake found.KoreaKoreankorma
korea
 were at the 16 marks in 2015 as they The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "hold"hold
holds
 the third rank among other nations. Apart from this, If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.South Asia
south Asia
 didn't The verb 'didn't' requires base form of this verb: "comprise"comprise
comprised
 of much proportion as it accounts This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 for 8% of the total You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 production. Afterward, African, Middle East, and Capitalize specific, well-defined geographical regions: "South America"South America
south America
 had insignificant figure as it comprised of 2 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percent
 and 4 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percent
respectively
.

To sum up, we could say that Possible spelling mistake found.EuropeEuroEuropaEurosEur opEuro p
Europ
 and greater China was by far the most Possible spelling mistake found.dominant
dominanet
 compared with others in term of manufacturing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
. 