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Chart 1 below shows the normal price of a tablet computer in different stores (in US dollars), and the % discount offered by these stores when the products are sold on promotion. Chart 2 shows the % increase in volume sales when the discount promotions are happening, and Chart 3 shows funds (in 000 US dollars) spent on TV advertising during these promotions. Write a report summarising the information. Select and describe the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The charts illustrate the cost of the computer as well as discounts for this item and the increasing trend of purchases in different stores. The last table demonstrates how much money is spent on advertisements. Overall, there are discounts and advertisements on television are being used in all organizations, but an exception is Smith, which does not spend its funds on TV promotions. Stores such as Lewis and Nova, these two places have a high portion of sales after discounts accounting for about 20 and 25% whereas former store has $460 as its initial prices for its products and 565$ for latter one. However, previous shops spend the least amount of money on product promotion (18000 and 21000 accordingly. As for the sales companies like Slaker, Jones, Scots and Fraser, all these stores used equal percentages for discounts (10%) and income after doing these increases between 10-15% in these four places. Turning to the money spent on TV by previous stores, the funds of these companies comprise between 63000 and 70000$.
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discounts
for this item and the increasing trend of
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purchases
in
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different
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stores
. The last table demonstrates how much money
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on advertisements.

Overall
, there are
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discounts
and advertisements on television are being
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used
in all organizations,
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but
an exception is Smith, which does not spend its funds on TV promotions.

Stores such as Lewis and Nova, these two places have a high portion of sales after
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discounts
accounting for about 20 and 25% whereas former
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store
has $460 as its initial prices for its products and
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565$
for latter one.
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, previous shops spend the least amount of money on product promotion
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18000 and 21000
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As for the sales
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companies
like
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Slaker
, Jones, Scots and Fraser, all these
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stores
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used
equal percentages for
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discounts
(10%) and income after doing these increases between 10-15% in these four places. Turning to the money spent on TV by previous
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stores
, the funds of these
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companies
comprise between 63000 and
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: “$70000”.
70000$
.
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IELTS academic Chart 1 below shows the normal price of a tablet computer in different stores (in US dollars), and the % discount offered by these stores when the products are sold on promotion. Chart 2 shows the % increase in volume sales when the discount promotions are happening, and Chart 3 shows funds (in 000 US dollars) spent on TV advertising during these promotions. Write a report summarising the information. Select and describe the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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  American English
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