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The bar chart demonstrates expenditure on six items in four different countries.

The bar chart demonstrates expenditure on six items in four different countries. Overall, all consumer goods are in demand among British people than another four European countries. There are the same trends for items: personal stereos, tennis racquets, and perfumes. If Britain leads in these items (spending between 140-160 pounds), second place goes to Germany and Italy, since the disparity between them is almost zero (around 150 pounds for each country). The items that have mentioned before are the least preferred ones in France account for above 140 pounds spending money. As for other three items, there are different consumption rate in terms of CDs, Toys and photographic film. In this situation, Britain and Germany are in high demand (more than160 pounds and below than 150 pounds respectively). France and Italy have equal consumption rate on Toys (nearly 160 pounds).

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