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Changes made to the current Grange Park

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The maps illustrate changes made to the Grange Park after its first opening in 1920. Overall, most of the layout of the park were changed even though the size of the park has remained the same At its first open in 1920, the Grange Park, a public park, had two main entrances on Eldon Street and Arnold Avenue. A fountain was located in the middle of park, and next to it was a stage for musicians. There were three rose gardens: one was located on Eldon Street side, and the other two were located on Arnold Avenue side. A glasshouse was located on the right side of Eldon Street entrance when entering the park. Opposite the glasshouse was a pond for water plants. Seats were placed around the park. At present, the two main entrances have been unchanged, and an entrance from an underground car park has been built on the right side of Eldon Street gate. The fountain has changed to a rose garden with seats around it. The stage for musicians has renovated to an amphitheatre for concert with more seating capacity. The glasshouse has been replaced with a water feature. A children’s play area, formerly a pond for water plants, has been added next to a new café. The only area that has stayed unaffected is the rose garden on Arnold Avenue, next to the amphitheatre.
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made to the Grange
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Park
after its
first
opening in 1920.
Overall
, most of the layout of the
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park
were
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changed
even though
the size of the
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park
has remained the same

At its
first
open in 1920, the Grange
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Park
, a public
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park
, had two main
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entrances
on Eldon
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Street
and Arnold Avenue. A fountain was
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located
in the middle of
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park
, and
next
to it was a stage for musicians. There were three rose gardens: one was
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located
on Eldon
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Street
side, and the other two were
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located
on Arnold Avenue side. A glasshouse was
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located
on the right side of Eldon
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Street
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entrance
when entering the
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park
. Opposite the glasshouse was a pond for water plants. Seats
were placed
around the park.

At present, the two main
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entrances
have
been unchanged
, and an
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entrance
from an underground car
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park
has
been built
on the right side of Eldon
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Street
gate. The fountain has
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changed
to a rose garden with seats around it. The stage for musicians has renovated to an
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amphitheatre
for concert with more seating capacity.
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The
glasshouse has
been replaced
with a water feature. A children’s play area,
formerly
a pond for water plants, has been
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added
next
to a new café. The
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area that has stayed unaffected is the rose garden on Arnold Avenue,
next
to the
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amphitheatre
.
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