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change of the island that in N83ld

The given maps represent the changes that happened as a part of commercial development in sunny island one the period of two decades. Over all it can be see that the island has undergone drastic transformation with various accommodation facility In 1997 we can see the huge afforestation all over the island with a finger tip accommodation and a wide range of hills in the sunny island. But in 2017 a drastic change can be seen in the island leaving the hills range. A numares commercial hotels are build all over the island leaving the residential houses behind, a wide range of restaurant are open on sunny island which gave a change to increase the fish bay nearby which leads to a mass deforestation.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 maps represent the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 that happened as a part of commercial development in sunny You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 one the period of two decades.

Over all it can be Did you mean "seen"?seen
see
 that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 has undergone drastic transformation with various accommodation facility

In The comma is probably missing here: "1997, we".1997, we
1997 we
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 the huge afforestation all over the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 with a finger tip accommodation and a wide range of hills The usual preposition for "island" is "on" not "in".  Revise: "on the sunny island".on the sunny island
in the sunny island
.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 in 2017 a drastic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 leaving the hills range. A Possible spelling mistake found.nu mares
numares
 commercial hotels are build all over the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 leaving the residential This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 behind, a wide Possible agreement error. The noun 'restaurant' seems to be countable; consider using: "range of restaurants".range of restaurants
range of restaurant
 are open on sunny You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 which gave a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 to increase the fish bay nearby which leads to a mass deforestation. 