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The table illustrates information regarding the amount of money spent on various goods [food, drinks/tobacco, education/leisure, clothing/footwear] in five different countries in 2002.

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The table illustrates information regarding the amount of money spent on various goods [food, drinks/tobacco, education/leisure, clothing/footwear] in five different countries in 2002. Overall, food/drinks and tobacco were the highest consumptions in all five countries while the least amount of money went to education and leisure. Furthermore, The Turkish and Irish people were among the top consumers compared to Italy, Sweden and Spain. Food/drinks and tobacco were the most used items with turkey and Italy spending 32% and 28% respectively. However, italy. Spain and Sweden expenditure was almost similar in the range of 15% to 18% with Sweden spending the least which is5. 43%. With regards to clothing and footwear, Italy's figure was the highest with 9% while the rest of four countries spent around 6%. When it comes to education and leisure, Turkey spent 4. 35% making it the highest, the other 4 countries consumption rate below 3%, with Spain spending the lowest which is 1. 98%.
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consumption rate below 3%, with Spain spending the lowest which is 1. 98%.
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