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The map shows the pancha house in 2005 and 2015.

The map shows the pancha house in 2005 and 2015. APrw1
The ostensible map detaiks the informatiom about tge development of apancha hometown overthe period of a decade from 2005 to 2015. To start with, it can be seen that in 2005, 5 houses were situated in the wwst of the village and except one home another four homes had antenna amenity on the roof, however after 10 years those apartments were positioned at same place but antenna was replaced by having cabel/ dish umbrella's also the size of homes was large. Whereas, road was not much developed before 2015 with big digs, on the contrary in 2015, it was modernized by transforming it into highway with road signs. Turning to the remaining infirmation, it can be witnessed that there was merely primary school was located in 2005 in the east corner of tge hometown, Whilst in 2015 with this secondary school was constructed and the market wasbnot huge in initila time but it was expanded in the end of the year by plenty of shops. In contrast, three accomodations were available in 2005 between the educational area and pagdda, two were cleared in 2015 and pagdda buildings size was narrow in comparison of 2005 but number if them was more. A satellite facikity was also added in 2015. Looking from an overall peespective, there were a plethora odf alterations experienced by a given residential segment throughout the years.
The ostensible map
detaiks
the
informatiom
about
tge
development of
apancha
hometown
overthe
period of a decade from 2005 to 2015.

To
start
with, it can be
seen
that in 2005, 5
houses
were situated
in the
wwst
of the village and except one home another four homes had antenna amenity on the roof,
however
after 10 years those apartments
were positioned
at same place
but
antenna
was replaced
by having
cabel
/ dish umbrella's
also
the size of homes was large. Whereas, road was not much developed
before
2015 with
big
digs,
on the contrary
in 2015, it
was modernized
by transforming it into highway with road signs.

Turning to the remaining
infirmation
, it can
be witnessed
that there was
merely
primary school
was located
in 2005 in the east corner of
tge
hometown, Whilst in 2015 with this secondary school
was constructed
and the market
wasbnot
huge in
initila
time
but
it
was expanded
in the
end
of the year by
plenty
of shops.
In contrast
, three
accomodations
were available in 2005 between the educational area and
pagdda
, two
were cleared
in 2015 and
pagdda
buildings size was narrow
in comparison
of 2005
but
number if them was more. A satellite
facikity
was
also
added
in 2015.

Looking from an
overall
peespective
, there were a plethora
odf
alterations experienced by a
given
residential segment throughout the years.
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IELTS academic The map shows the pancha house in 2005 and 2015.

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