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The pie chart represents the total school spending in five various categories, which were teacher’s salaries, insurance,other worker salaries, resources books, and furniture equipment in three years 1981, 1991, and 2001.

The pie chart represents the total school spending in five various categories, which were teacher’s salaries, insurance, other worker salaries, resources books, and furniture equipment in three years 1981, 1991, and 2001. gxq81
The pie chart represents the total school spending in five various categories, which were teacher’s salaries, insurance, other worker salaries, resources books, and furniture equipment in three years 1981, 1991, and 2001. Overall, it seem to be that the most spending in every year was on the teachers’s salaries and the less spending was on insurance. To begin with, 1981 the most spending was on Teacher’s salaries (40%) follow by, other worker’s salaries (28%), resources books and furniture equipment were the same percents (15%). The lowest spending this years was on insurance (2%). Moreover, in 1991
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in five various categories, which were teacher’s
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, resources books, and furniture equipment in three years 1981, 1991, and 2001.
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in every year was on the
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salaries
and the less
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was on insurance.

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was on Teacher’s
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salaries
(40%) follow by, other worker’s
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salaries
(28%), resources books and furniture equipment were the same percents (15%). The lowest
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spending
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IELTS academic The pie chart represents the total school spending in five various categories, which were teacher’s salaries, insurance, other worker salaries, resources books, and furniture equipment in three years 1981, 1991, and 2001.

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