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The coffee production process

The coffee production process N83W0

The diagram below illustrates the process of coffee production. Coffee that has many fans in all over the world passes some steps until reach to consumers. First of all, coffee beans are harvested from coffee farms. After that, they are taken to the depulper machine that removes the coffee beans' pulp. Before drying the beans, they are laid in fermenting tanks for 1 to 3 days and then they are allowed to dry. After the beans were dried, they are laid in sorter lines and are sorted in different sizes. Then, sorted coffee beans are taken to roaster device and are roasted to desirable degree. Before sending coffee to grocery stores they are grinded to small sizes in grinder. Finally, costumers could buy them from stores and use coffees.

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